Wednesday, October 24, 2018

Hanes Student Wins State Award for Poetry


Sydney Anthos, an eighth grader at Hanes Magnet Middle, has received the Kathryn Stripling Byer Poet Laureate award at the North Carolina English Teachers Association conference. The award came with $250.
Sydney was nominated by Hanes teacher Jennifer Flanagan.

“Sydney is a remarkable thinker and has always been one to take creative risks through writing,” Flanagan said. 

“She is a unique person, often introverted, and although she is timid in person, she is a lion on paper. Her unique take on writing topics are refreshing to read, and her writing style seems effortless and is flawless.”

“When I read her winning poem ‘War of Fire,’ I thought it had such a beautiful rhythm to it, and it was delicately written with pointed, smart vocabulary. She has a talent for developing a rhyme scheme that does not seem forced.” 

“Her poetry is musical and unique, just like Sydney. It was a pleasure having her as my student, and I am so happy that such a prestigious award went to such a humble, deserving student.”

Asked why she likes poetry, Sydney said, “I like that you can convey powerful messages with so few words.”

“A single poem can be interpreted many different ways depending on the individual reader. This is not possible or very difficult in other methods of writing.”

Sydney also likes the “flow” of poetry.

Her winning poem grew out of an assignment by Flanagan.

“I tend to read a lot of news and follow current events and I was thinking about our world and I just poured all my thoughts on to the paper,” she said.

Here is the poem:

War of Fire
By Sydney Anthos

The soldiers stood there battered and worn
Staring at a dark, desolate world, war torn
And watched it creep closer, It’s eyes full of hate
The burning, blackening, blazing fire crying it’s too late
can you not see that I have won
Look at this world and see what I have done
Nations of ashes
Countries of dust
Destroyed by men of power and lust
Cities of fear, mountains of shame
But nobody willing to take the blame
Terror and pain tear lives apart
Shattering earth’s thunderous heart
But if a heart breaks
It can still live
While greed takes
Love can give
Power is a burning fire
A fire always needing fuel
A fire merciless and cruel
But water is peace
Calm and cool
And robs fire of its fuel
This is the true meaning of war
Not the good from the bad or the rich from the poor
This war of greed and desire
Is known as the War of Fire



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